From 889a139c8357be5648d907da3ee903369bafeeca Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Derek Mahar Date: Mon, 23 Jul 2012 19:39:29 -0300 Subject: [PATCH 1/2] Corrected some grammatical errors in section "What is Akka?". --- akka-docs/intro/what-is-akka.rst | 9 ++++----- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/akka-docs/intro/what-is-akka.rst b/akka-docs/intro/what-is-akka.rst index 4bddb27fe6..c379578d6d 100644 --- a/akka-docs/intro/what-is-akka.rst +++ b/akka-docs/intro/what-is-akka.rst @@ -1,4 +1,3 @@ - .. _what-is-akka: ############### @@ -11,10 +10,10 @@ We believe that writing correct concurrent, fault-tolerant and scalable applications is too hard. Most of the time it's because we are using the wrong tools and the wrong level of abstraction. Akka is here to change that. Using the Actor Model we raise the abstraction level and provide a better platform to build -correct concurrent and scalable applications. For fault-tolerance we adopt the -"Let it crash" model which have been used with great success in the telecom industry to build -applications that self-heals, systems that never stop. Actors also provides the -abstraction for transparent distribution and the basis for truly scalable and +correct, concurrent, and scalable applications. For fault-tolerance we adopt the +"Let it crash" model which the telecom industry has used with great success in to +build applications that self-heal and systems that never stop. Actors also provides +the abstraction for transparent distribution and the basis for truly scalable and fault-tolerant applications. Akka is Open Source and available under the Apache 2 License. From 0e0c55010af9476e9b2981e4b3c2030641b03f10 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Derek Mahar Date: Tue, 24 Jul 2012 10:54:04 -0300 Subject: [PATCH 2/2] Corrected grammar errors that Viktor Klang identified in first paragraph of "What is Akka?". --- akka-docs/intro/what-is-akka.rst | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/akka-docs/intro/what-is-akka.rst b/akka-docs/intro/what-is-akka.rst index c379578d6d..78f89f43de 100644 --- a/akka-docs/intro/what-is-akka.rst +++ b/akka-docs/intro/what-is-akka.rst @@ -11,8 +11,8 @@ applications is too hard. Most of the time it's because we are using the wrong tools and the wrong level of abstraction. Akka is here to change that. Using the Actor Model we raise the abstraction level and provide a better platform to build correct, concurrent, and scalable applications. For fault-tolerance we adopt the -"Let it crash" model which the telecom industry has used with great success in to -build applications that self-heal and systems that never stop. Actors also provides +"Let it crash" model which the telecom industry has used with great success to +build applications that self-heal and systems that never stop. Actors also provide the abstraction for transparent distribution and the basis for truly scalable and fault-tolerant applications.